Tag: Writing

Descriptive Writing

Task Description: Today in literacy we did a quick writing, this means that we all will be given an image to look at. Then once we are done remembering what was in that image, we got a couple of minutes to write about what was in the image and imagine that we were in that situation. We have to use the five senses, smell, hear, taste, see and feel. Thank you for checking out my blog hope to check out yours sooner. Tofa Soifua.

 

Camp Bentzon Top 5 tips.

Task Description: Today I have finished my writing task for the week.The task was about us making tips for the year 5 soon to be year 6’s.Doing this is good for the year 5 because when they turn year 6’s they will know what to do when going camp.I loved doing this and I hope they check out my tips for Camp Bentzon.

About Me Writing

 

Talofa Lava! My Name is Kree,I am Ten years old and I go to Pt England school and my Teacher Is Mr Hughes.I am a year 6.My Family is from Tonga,Samoa,Cook Island and New Zealand.I have five siblings,3 Sisters and 2 Brothers. My favourite thing about school is learning new things.My favourite thing outside school is playing outside and paying sports.My LEAST favourite thing about school is not being with my Friends.

 

In the weekends I play some sports outside with my siblings.My Hobbies are art,sports and singing.My favourite food is butter chicken chips.

 

The Natural Disaster Weekend

 

 

 

                                                               The Natural Disaster

                                                                         Weekend

                                       

Last Friday my family and I went to America for the weekend. We booked a hotel for us to stay in so we went to our hotel but on the way to the hotel we saw a natural disaster and the disaster was a tornado.

 

My dad said “I’m going to take some pictures of the tornado”.  I responded to my dad 

 

”NO don’t go out there, it’s DANGEROUS!” but he  didn’t listen and he still went out to go and take a picture.  I thought in my head saying ”my dad is really dumb”.   But when he tried  to go and take a picture the tornado was coming straight at us so my dad ran as FAST as he could to the car.

 

He opened the door and got in and then we turn the car around and drove as fast as we could and went to my auntie just down town and stay there until the disaster finish

 

….A few hours later…..while we were waiting we finally got a notification about the tornado saying that the tornado had finally stopped so we went back to the hotel and had the best time in America.

Spy-Mouse

Task Description:Yesterday I did Spy-mouse.It was kinda fun to do.

On Monday I found a mouse that almost looked like a Spy mouse.He probably smelled the cheese that was on the table in the sitting room.I acted like I didn’t know what was going on.I just keeped on watching him Like I didn’t know.It was really cool to watch.I never saw a mouse that was a spy.Before the little came over to steal my cheese I set up a trap to make it more hard for the mouse to get the cheese.I was hiding behind the door to see what he was going to do.When I was watching the mouse he was so careful to not get snap by the mouse trap.It was almost like he was in a acting movie.Where he had to pretend that he had to move around and try not to turn the alarm on.Next he tried to be sneaky and go on the roof and got his rope out of his bag that he had.He attach the rope to the roof and then went to window that was on top of the roof.I was so so shocked.he was so sneaky that he got the cheese.It was a great show to watch.